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    • scottalanmillerS
      scottalanmiller
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      MS SQL Server is always "SQL Server", don't drop the last part of the name.

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      • scottalanmillerS
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        MySQL needs SQL capitalized.

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        • scottalanmillerS
          scottalanmiller
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          You have FreeBSD under Linux. We know what you mean, but BSD isn't Linux.

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          • dbeatoD
            dbeato @scottalanmiller
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            @scottalanmiller said in Resume Critique:

            You have FreeBSD under Linux. We know what you mean, but BSD isn't Linux.

            Understood.

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            • dbeatoD
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              @scottalanmiller said in Resume Critique:

              MySQL needs SQL capitalized.

              Got it, I am changing it.

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              • scottalanmillerS
                scottalanmiller
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                I would drop MS Office from your skills list. You are too senior to be listing that kind of stuff.

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                • scottalanmillerS
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                  Unless you want to focus on those certs, I'd move them to the very end, around the Education section.

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                  • dbeatoD
                    dbeato @scottalanmiller
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                    @scottalanmiller said in Resume Critique:

                    want to focus on those certs, I'd move them to the very end, around the Education section.

                    I don't, those are the only Certs I have right now. But I will move them.

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                    • scottalanmillerS
                      scottalanmiller
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                      Compress this a bit. Especially the video editing for the church. Listing it to have the dates is fine. But No need to talk about non-IT tasks.

                      I would not call it being on the construction crew when maintaining the company computers. This is confusing.

                      The spacing is messed up in this section as well.

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                      • scottalanmillerS
                        scottalanmiller
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                        At the highest level, this feels like it could be pretty easily compressed to two pages.

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